Outcast Zero, Page 7 - Copyright Dennis Sweatt 2010
Page 7 is an introduction for Misty, to show her fearlessness.
Being raised on the farm in a small community, she is more curious than courageous.
Panel 1, the three are flying in pattern searching for OZ. So the helmets are looking in different directions but flying in a delta pattern. Methodical.
Panel 2, is to get a full shot of Misty, in farm girl regalia and to show grandpa isn't phased by explosions or flying debris. Since I kill off grandpa in the first book I want to set familiarity for the reader to justify his unloading of a clip into the bad guy.
Panel 3, Mom is completes the farmer family setting and as protector since grandpa is so detached because of the war.
I thought pulling back on panel 2 and using the discovery of OZ in the barn as Misty's full shot.
Outcast Zero© flies into a barn the hard way - Copyright 2010
Being raised on the farm in a small community, she is more curious than courageous.
Panel 1, the three are flying in pattern searching for OZ. So the helmets are looking in different directions but flying in a delta pattern. Methodical.
Panel 2, is to get a full shot of Misty, in farm girl regalia and to show grandpa isn't phased by explosions or flying debris. Since I kill off grandpa in the first book I want to set familiarity for the reader to justify his unloading of a clip into the bad guy.
Panel 3, Mom is completes the farmer family setting and as protector since grandpa is so detached because of the war.
I thought pulling back on panel 2 and using the discovery of OZ in the barn as Misty's full shot.
Outcast Zero© flies into a barn the hard way - Copyright 2010
I have been told that panel 3 is a bit claustrophobic.
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ReplyDeleteThanks,
Ben Blease